Sample 2

Rewriting an existing viral article

Original Article (exerpt)

So many people nowadays are becoming desperate in order to lose weight. They are starting to go to unhealthy lengths in order to look skinny, because they think that it is attractive. However, losing weight in an unhealthy way could certainly be very damaging to your body.

Rewritten Article

Many people nowadays have become desperate to lose the extra weight. Some of them are willing to use unhealthy measures to get rid of those extra pounds because they are desperate to look better. However, unhealthy weight loss can cause serious damage to your overall health.